Monday, 24 November 2008

A revelation

The strangest thing happened to me earlier.

I realized how to write.

I was in my English class, and the teacher said something about sentence structure, and I just suddenly understood everything I was doing wrong with my writing and what I had to change.

For the past month or so, I have been wondering how to write a calm, relaxing beginning to a book while still setting the stage for the story and creating suspense. And now I know. And because I know that, I know how to write the rest of a story as well.

More importantly (or perhaps more accurately) I discovered my own writing style - or rather, the refined version of it. So from now on I'll be able to write better, all because of a random revelation.

I can't tell you exactly what it is that I realized, first of all because I don't know how to explain it in a way that would make sense and fully describe it properly, and also because it will only really make sense in my head. Only I can put this idea into my words.

I don't mean to be reserving or selfish - I seriously don't know how to explain it exactly. But I can say that it involves not overusing commas. This is something I am notorious for, even without realizing it. Using short to medium length sentences without commas sets a good tone for the beginning of a story, I think, as well as other parts of a book.

If that last paragraph didn't make sense or doesn't really help, you have my leave to completely ignore and/or forget about it.

It was such a wierd experience...I mean, it just all CAME to me...it was very distracting for the rest of the class. Maybe it's because I was thinking about writing so much for about a week before that, although I hadn't really thought about writing at all in the morning before it.

Ciao!

5 comments:

Judi said...

What is it with you and Araken..it's spelled weird not wierd!!! Where did you guys get that spelling???
-Judi

Ian said...

...

I know how to spell it. It isn't my mind - it's my fingers. They LIE to me.

I'll change it eventually. I'm school right now.

:)Ian(:

Lauren Ann said...

You sound like you would be a really good writer.

I'm Lauren Ann, I am 13 years old, I am a YCF, and I like your blog.

Ian said...

Welcome, Lauren, and thank you!

:)Ian(:

Judi said...

*GASP!* They LIE to you???!!! OH MY GOODNESS!! What're you going to do about that??? You can't let them lie to you forever!! Take care of that, fast. Threaten them if you have to, but Spelling is the only thing i'm good at in school..it kills me to see something misspelled..
-Judi
PS: I'm high maintenance :)
PSS: I really don't care, i just wanted to see if you really knew how to spell it...